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                         Loop & Loop by

Asian Kung-fu Generation

(アジアン・カンフー・ジェネレーション, Ajian Kanfū Jenerēshon?)

"Loop & Loop" is one of the songs in the Nintendo DS musical game Osu! Tatakae! Ouendan.

Lyrics and translation.
 
migi te ni shiroi kami
 riyuu naki boku no e wo egaita tochuu de nage dasu
 sono hikaru ashita wo

A white paper in my right hand
 For no reason, I draw my pictures and throw them out midway through
 That lights up tomorrow

 hidari te yogashite
 na mo naki kimi no e wo egaita uchuu de deatta
 sono hikaru ashita wo
 tomedonai ao kieru keshiki owaru fuyu wo

My dirty left hand
 Unnamed, I drew your picture and came across it in space
 That lights up tomorrow
 Endless blue, disappearing scenery, an ending winter

 nuke dasu tobira wo shizumeru hidoi ame
 shimi komu kokoro no okusoko ni hibiite
 tayorinai ashita no hakanai omoi mo
 wazuka na hikari de kiri toru shiroi kage

 The terrible rain submerges the door that slips away
 It echoes in the bottom of my permeated heart
 Undependable tomorrow's fleeting memory
 Is also a white shadow cut off from a small light

 shosen tsuki sashite samayotte nuri tsubusu kimi no kyou mo
 tsumari endo & sutaato
 tsumi ageru yowai mahou

After all, even this stabbed, knocked about, blotted out you of today
 Will ultimately end and start
 This gathered-up weak magic

 yuen ushinatte samayotte tare nagasu boku no kyou wo
 hashiri dashita endo rooru
 tsumaranai imeeji wo kowase
 sou sa

The reason; for this lost, knocked about, soiled me of today
 The end credits started to run
 Break this boring image
 That's right

 kimi to boku de karamatte tsunagu mirai
 saishuu katachi no sono saki wo niau sedai

 With you and I, the future begins to connect to
 The world that carries the last figure at the end

 boku ga egaita sono kage ni kimi no mirai wa kasunde shimatta?

Has your future that I wrote to this shadow grown hazy?

 shosen tsuki sashite samayotte nuri tsubusu kimi no kyou mo
 tsumari endo & sutaato
 tsumi ageru yowai mahou

After all, even this stabbed, knocked about, blotted out you of today
 Will ultimately end and start
 This gathered-up weak magic

 yuen ushinatte samayotte tare nagasu boku no kyou wo
 hashiri dashita endo rooru
 tsumaranai imeeji wo kowase
 sou sa

The reason; for this lost, knocked about, soiled me of today
 The end credits started to run
 Break this boring image
 That's right